Worldwide Cypher Jam (round 29) RAW RAP

I would love to hear your feedback on this sess, this is a Worldwide Cypher Jam round 29 by @termitemusic

LYRICS:
i'm having fun even with a dime,
life gave me lemons and I made a lime,
were you that thirsty? read between the lines,
but firstly, listen to these rhymes,

i'll take you on a journey with a happy end
even if you burn me, you are still my friend
rising like a phoenix, spreading our wings
these new beginnings, learning new things

accepting our feelings so we fly above the skies,
above the nationality, above the fucking lies,
Call it a reality while wearing a disguise
where is morality when an innocent dies

I shit on the rules and puke on the law
hear the street blues this shit is raw
his father left, he's crying on the floor
mocked by peers, but it ain't his fault

crusing the streets with all his flaws
watching the misfits acting like demigods
digging their pits accepted the odds
but he isn't who he was

Stay positive, driven and keep spreading those good vibes! 💚 Love from positivity420