I Changed A Few Things In This Drawing

Hello everyone! How are you today?
Okay, I want to share the completed piece of my recent commissioned piece and tell you about the changes made.

The picture above is the picture I used for the main drawing while changing the face and replaced it with the picture below. This was the client idea and not just that, he asked that I remove the beards completed.
So here is the finished work.
Please how did do?
Rate my work please.

Size: 24x34 inches

Materials:
General's charcoal pencil, graphite pencil, Tombow mono zero eraser, Alabaster paper, flat paint brushes and makeup brushes.

I Just realised that I didn't take much progress shots. Here are few:

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