MAKE ME YOUR WORLD

I decided to try a bit of love poem today, I guess I suck at that. Nevertheless, feed your eyes on this, your comment and critique is gladly appreciated.

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Let me be your wind
Breathing lilting cool melodies
That set your heart in motion

Let me be your moon
never leaves you in darkness
Reflects light in your sadness

Let me be your star
Small, sparkling with bright light
Far above the world in great height

Let me be your flower
Piercing your heart with sweet scent
With lasting fragrance than incense

Let me be your rainbow
Decorating your world with glowing radiance
Building up your colour-studded heavens

Let me be your tears
Draining down traces of your worries
Showing flashes of your emotions

Let me be your smiles
Reflecting the gladness in your heart
Shining your face like burning flames